….of all the times I’ve read the threat Nighthawk carves on the outside of Gandon’s basement…. of all the times people have critiqued and said the wording was confusing….. none of us picked up on the fact that he’s BLIND. HE DOESN’T KNOW HOW TO WRITE 😛
I’m doing an adverb / passive voice scan and today I LOVE my novel. Days like that can be rare when editing.
I’ve also found a pen in my glass of milk.
So I may just be crazy.